I thanked him for his suggestions and made the font change. I didn't even mind the implied criticism.I posted the story, it was a little out of place ...ecause the site specializes in erotica, but they allowed about anything legal to be posted.It was up for less than eight hours and I started getting emails. Most were complimentary but several with some sincere criticism. I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed some run on sentences, also paragraphs were too long.. A smirk crawled across Trina's face. "I know, I'm hot, right?" She pulled the magenta top off, tracing a finger over her stomach, making the muscles flex and ripple. Finally, someone who understood how good Trina was, how very much better she was. Honestly, sometimes people had her questioning her talent... even her looks! It was sacrilege...How could people not see how great she was?She was surprised when Cat stood, coming over to her, Cat's rich brown eyes intensely focused on Trina's abs.. “It’s silly, really...”“You can tell us, just take your time,” said Jess.Emma took a deep breath, held it, and let it out.“Ok. You remember Mike at work that I mentioned? Well, I asked him out like you guys said and I got shot down. See? I told you it was silly,” Emma blew air straight up making her hair wave.“Hey, hey, hey. It’s not silly,” Jess said, patting Emma on the arm. “Look, rejection sucks. A lot. But you should be proud of yourself. Asking a guy out is a huge step.”“And he obviously. The police officer directed us to the conference room where Fallon was already in hand cuffs. As we entered the room Lyle Wallace Sr. started to rush over to me, but after seeing that I was nearly a foot taller than him and nearly a hundred pounds or more heavier than him, he started shouting and pacing back and forth and telling the police to arrest the black bastard who jumped on his son unprovoked on assault and battery charges with the intent to do great bodily harm! Pam had a guy.
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